As a Peer Success Coach at USU, I regularly provided written feedback on students papers, logs, etc. As a Digital Editorial intern for the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, I often proofread other interns articles. I provided revisions to improve clarity, fix grammatical errors, and reduce word count.
Revisions I provided for the Youth Voices section of the FTSOY magazine. Click 'edit document' to view track changes.
(Only viewable to FTSOY editors)
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Screenshots above are revisions I provided for a USU student's paper.